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RE: Concurso semanal de escritura de cuentos 3 | Continuación de la historia
Hello @cruzamilcar63,
While reading the story, the character's past gradually opened up, which I liked. Letters, pictures, and tickets—these things beautifully brought the mystery of the story to the fore. The story deepened when Alicia and Oliver came into the picture.
The ending was quite different. It wasn't revenge, but a strange solution to the mistakes of the past was shown. This line, "Por los errores del pasado," brought the whole story together and concluded it. Overall, a quiet but thought-provoking continuation.
| Verification | & Feedback |
|---|---|
| Article presentation: | good ✅ |
| Story originality: | looks original ✅ |
| Plagiarism free: | ✅ |
| Steemexclusive: | ✅ |
| Contest rules followed: | ✅ |
| Entry status: | valid ✅ |
| Score: | 9.7/10 |
Best wishes for the contest
Le agradezco la lentura atenta del relato para ofrendarnos excelentes comentarios. Un gran saludo.