Your piece “Neighborhood Watch” beautifully depicts rural life and social traditions. It is a beautiful feature of our culture that people gather together on religious and communal occasions like Tahleen, help each other and then eat together, and you have described it very simply and realistically. Along with this, you have also included issues of daily life such as child safety, caution in water area and taking care of animals which shows your responsibility and sensitivity. Overall your writing paints a beautiful picture of a simple yet rich rural life.