"SC-S32/W1-"Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—The Personal Diary.
Hello! I welcome you all to my blog. Today I'm gonna be participating in @mahadisalim 's "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—The Personal Diary challenge.
It rained all night today. There was no electricity due to the rain all night. I woke up in the morning and felt very hot. I woke up and went outside. I went out for a walk on the road. At that time, the road was flooded. These are paved roads. So it was not difficult to walk. If it was a village road, it would have turned muddy. I walked to the market. I was walking along the road. Rickshaws were coming and going from the other side of me, and people were also walking. The market is a little far from our house. Still, it was morning. So I left on foot. I really like walking to the market in the morning. I often walk to the market like this.
When I went to the market, I saw that the shops were not open in the market. I went to a vegetable shop. I saw gourds in the shop. The gourds were quite beautiful. There were also shrimps and brinjals there. If you go in the morning, you can get fresh vegetables. I bought fresh gourds and shrimps for my house. I like to cook gourds with shrimps and fish.
Then I went to the fish market. To buy shrimp. If you don't go to the fish market in the morning, you can't get fresh fish. I went there and found some big shrimp. The price of this fish was very high. I bought 250 grams of fish. Then I took the fish and went to a pharmacy. They asked me to buy a medicine. But I couldn't find the medicine anywhere. I searched a lot. But I couldn't find it. Then I came home.
The sky was clear in the afternoon today. After taking a bath in the afternoon, I went to the field. I was sitting in the field. Then I saw that the sky was covered with white clouds. Now it is difficult to understand when the rain will come. It is raining heavily every night. You can only understand when you get up in the morning and go out on the street. How much rain it had rained last night.
Our field is flooded. So there is no way to play. There is a lot of water in the field. I thought I would play football in the afternoon. But playing football in this water will make my body dirty. Then I have to take a bath again. So instead of playing football, I walked on the street in front of my house. It was nice to chat with friends in the afternoon.
Your diary captures the beautiful moments of daily life beautifully. Going to the market in the morning after the rain, buying fresh vegetables and prawns, then spending time with friends in the evening all bring the reader closer to your day. Especially the mention of flooded fields and changing weather after rains makes the writing more interesting. You have beautifully portrayed even a simple day.
Here is my moderation guide...
Your personal diary is characterised with different activities carried out during the day, taking a morning walk to the market in the morning to purchase some items .Its good seeing some one who loves vegetables a lot .Am seeing your administration consuming vegetables is something else .You could not see yourself leaving the market without buying some to take home.
I see you a fan of football, you have really discussed a lot about going to the field to play football but unfortunately rain fell heavily and could’nt allow you to play football and you left the field disappointed. That how some days are you planned and God planned it differently from what you are expecting.
My observation is that you have not taken time to state the date of your personal diary.I just assumed your writeup is about yesterday . No comments on other authors post who have participated in the engagement. Markdown not well applied atleast try to use two markdown when you are writing .Lastly,no selfie taken with throughout your activities atleast one .Try to improve on the things I have mentioned above .Read well on rules of any engagement challenge before writing.
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Scores| 6.7/10
Thank you mam
You are right. I also once ate gourd with shrimp. But I don't eat shrimp. Gourd is such a vegetable that it goes well with anything you cook it with.
Greetings my friend. You gave very real picture of rainy day. I like you start your morning with walk to market despite water on roads. Fresh vegetable and prawns always make food more tasty. It was little disappointing that you can not play football because of the flooded field. But spending time with friends in evening sounds like a good way to end the day. Weather can change our plans. Good luck