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RE: El Tren - Flash Fiction

in The Ink Well • 5 years ago

Thank you for the great feedback, @raj808! It made my day. You picked up on all the nuances I sprinkled in. Katrina is not supposed to be likable at first. But she discovers that being a surly teenager is not going to get her anything in life except heartache.

Take care of yourself, my friend. That’s the most important thing.

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     5 years ago (edited)

    You're welcome. I woke up at 3am as I always do at the moment so I thought I'd have a look at what had turned up at The Ink Well... and well... I wasn't disappointed with your story.

    But she discovers that being a surly teenager is not going to get her anything in life except heartache.

    Ha ha, fiction is fiction after all 😉 I never learned that lesson until it was too late and a few things had happened after I'd moved out of my parental home to teach me a little caution and wisdom.

    It has given me that much needed ten minute reading moment before I try and get a few more hours shut eye 😄

    Take care of yourself, my friend. That’s the most important thing.

    Will do. But I have setting, characters and plot outlined so I may as well give it a stab tomorrow before another prompt is due on Tuesday

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    Good luck! Follow that muse. She can be capricious.

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