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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem23 days ago (edited)

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

Reading this post brought back many memories of my school life. You have very simply and naturally conveyed the joys, fears, mistakes and lessons learned from your school life, which I found amazing.

You have beautifully described the incident of pouring water on your friends after the WAEC exam. This is not just a personal memory, but also a vivid picture of Nigerian culture.

You have shared with us the importance of gratitude and friendship by mentioning your teacher Mr. Atiku and friend Ikechukwu. The impact that a teacher’s right guidance and a friend’s companionship can have in school life is clearly evident here.

The place to admit your mistakes is also very commendable. Speaking frankly about your academic neglect in the beginning is really a brave act. We can learn from this too.

I found your school life education, discipline, hard work, unity and moral values ​​​​great.

Overall, this is a heartwarming, realistic and educational piece. Reading the post, one can understand that school is not just a place of study, but also the most important chapter in the development of a person. Best wishes to you.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.7
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood1.8
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total9 Points