RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia del pequeño yo: Mis días de escuela
Greetings,
Thank you so much for participating in the contest.
I really enjoyed reading your writing. Taking part in a drawing competition during childhood and winning a prize is truly memorable. I also used to participate in drawing competitions when I was a child. Back then, there were no smartphones, and activities like these felt genuinely joyful. We didn’t realize it at that time, but happiness doesn’t always come from big achievements, it often lives quietly in small moments.
Feeling fear and uncertainty at the beginning of school life is very natural. What I appreciated most is how you gradually turned that fear into confidence and were able to return to a normal school life with the support of your family, teachers, and classmates. This part of your story was amazing.
You shared some wonderful thoughts about teachers. From your article, it’s clear how important teachers are in shaping our school life. At the same time, you didn’t forget to mention the role of your friends, which shows how grateful you are for their presence and support.
You are absolutely right that repeating a year was not a failure for you, but rather a way to become stronger. Teachers truly are one of the main pillars of success in school life, because students learn not only lessons, but also values and discipline from them.
| Section | Description | Points |
|---|---|---|
| Plagiarism & AI Free | Original storytelling from childhood | 2 |
| Original Photography | Personal photos or recreated moments, photo caption | 1.7 |
| Markdown & Presentation | Neat format, readable, visually appealing | 1.7 |
| Memory Description | Emotions, details, and clarity of childhood | 2 |
| Life Lesson / Value | Reflection on what the memory taught you | 2 |
| Total | 9.4 Points |
Gracias por la verificación y tan excelente reflexión de mi participación.
Te confieso que disfrute mucho, recordar cada detalle y escribir cada línea.
¡Me encantó participar!
Hasta la próxima semana.
Thank you. Hope to read your entry every week.