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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : Childhood Food Memories

in Story On Steem14 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

You have very naturally shared your childhood memories around noodles, your mother’s cooking, and the small moments of that time. Sitting beside your mother while she cooked, the hurry, and her loving care and gentle scolding were described beautifully.

The description of the food’s taste, smell, and the moments spent with family clearly brings out a sense of nostalgia. I also liked how you showed the connection between your childhood habits and how they are now reflected in your children. The photos you took match the post well, and I especially liked the scene where you are feeding your child.

Overall, it is a heart-touching piece of writing that brings back childhood feelings for the reader. However, adding captions under the photos and including one or two recipe steps would have made it even better.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal childhood food storytelling2
Original PhotographyPersonal or recreated food photos with caption1.9
Markdown & PresentationNeat, readable, visually appealing1.9
Memory DescriptionTaste, smell, emotions, and vivid details2
Emotional / Family ConnectionBond, love, culture, and nostalgia linked to food2
Total9.8 Points
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@sohanurrahman, thank you so much for reviewing my post and your valuable feedback.