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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : Childhood Food Memories

in Story On Steem13 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

Puri, singara, and khaja are traditional foods of our country. You nicely described how much you liked these foods in your childhood, the fun of eating them at familiar local hotels, and the taste and feelings connected to them.

You also rightly mentioned that these foods do not taste the same today as they did before. Nowadays, unhealthy ingredients are often used, which reduces their quality and original flavor.

Overall, you wrote very well. The post would look even better if you added food captions and included only one photo of each item.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal childhood food storytelling2
Original PhotographyPersonal or recreated food photos with caption1.5
Markdown & PresentationNeat, readable, visually appealing1.8
Memory DescriptionTaste, smell, emotions, and vivid details2
Emotional / Family ConnectionBond, love, culture, and nostalgia linked to food2
Total9.3 Points
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Thank you very much for reviewing my post.