Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

The description of your first day really stood out, the fear and helplessness of being in a new environment is completely natural. Thank you for sharing this moment.

However, I felt really sad reading about the bullying incident by your classmates on that first day. Bullying can seriously affect a student’s life. Yet, I was impressed by your honesty and the calm way you handled the situation. It shows that even from a young age, you were learning patience and resilience, and because of that, you were able to form meaningful friendships later.

I also loved the story of your friend who supported you like an older sister. Having such senior friends is truly important in school life. I really appreciate how you tried to guide your cousin like an elder sister, for me it was a good and responsible effort. Even though your cousin and her family didn’t understand you at that time, which must have been painful, it reflects your caring and mature personality.

I also loved how you highlighted reading books as a good habit, which helps build determination. School life truly teaches the importance of discipline and cleanliness, and these habits become the foundation for future success.