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RE: Growing Up / My Filipino Wife's Story

in #philippines7 years ago (edited)

kumusta crowe! :) nice post. your wife is lovely and also your kids. the story told by your wife was very nice and interesting, but if I could make a comment (bcuz that's what comments are for, right?) it would be that this post would've flowed better with some paragraph breaks. I also wrote a post that was 1200 words.. i decided it was too long and broke it up into 2 posts. Even 3 posts could be made from any post more than 900 words. :)

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Ah thanks. That's a great idea. Next time I'll remember that. Have a great day.