Another spoken word poem of mine.
Just uploaded a new spoken word poem to my YouTube channel.
It's partly related to why I was feeling depressed the other day.
It's a poem about heart break and someone who I used to believe in.
Thanks for checking it out if you do..
And.. While this poem significantly helped me find my voice and get the courage to do spoken word..
I hope I don't end up making many more sad heart break poems, it's not a fun or comfortable subject.
Anyways.. I think that's about it for now..
I do want to be more positive in life, and this poem was a way to help me get some of that negativity and shitty energy out of me.
Thanks for your time, and.. Peace.
nice
Thanks!
Heyyy !!! Well, if you are paying her back with these harsh feelings and words, dude, you are no different from her !! If you cared for her so much and loved her so much then what she did to you shouldn't change anything. I am sorry, I have been too deep in understanding the reality of love and to be frank what you said in the video above, I can not see love in it at all !! Its such a coincidence that I finished up writing my poetry about the fake love that people get trapped into. We all need to understand that this isn't love. Love can not be painful !! It really disturbs me to the core when I see people crying and blaming love for it, or the other person. Love never blames. You and everyone else need to read this poetry - "SPURIOUSNESS OF TRUE LOVE" which might not just ease your pain but also can make you realise it wasn't love. I hope god blesses you and you can come out of this trap as soon as possible.
Letting someone walk all over you isn't love either.
If you loved someone and they raped and murdered someone you think you should not say anything? Or change how you feel at all?
The bad things people do should be acknowledged. Unconditional love is most likely a myth and if it was possible it would not be something I would want.
I still love her, but not as much. Because she cheated on me 3 times and ignored me and lied and treated me like shit. You think I should just ignore all that? Sorry. No.
You have your opinion. I have mine. I change how I look at people based on how they act and what they do, and ME SPEAKING OUT about being mistreated IS NOT THE SAME THING AS BEING MISTREATED..
Do you think victims of rape should also just shut up and not speak out? I mean how far does that logic of yours go? Why do you think victims should not speak their mind? That's really strange to me.
Silence never favors the victim, silence always favors the abuser.
You didn't check my link. That's why I mentioned it. But no worries I think i will have to repeat it all again here as you are not making the required effort.
I am not talking about allowing someone to take benefit of you. I am talking about not feeling the pain that you are feeling. Of course as I mentioned in my poem which I gave you the link to that first you need to love yourself only then can you love someone else. And when you love yourself you wont allow someone to rape you.
Now you say she cheated you 3 times! She could have cheated you 5 times, you shouldn't give so many chances to someone. If you loved yourself first then you wouldn't have done that. So it's your fault first.
Of course everyone have their own opinions. But opinions are never permanent. I think this platform is more about understanding each other then contradicting each other. If you want only those people to comment who have same opinions as yours, then you can never allow new ideas and thinking to generate. Facing criticism helps one develop and it shouldn't be shunned upon by a wise man.
You speaking out is not what I consider wrong, you being so effected and so in pain is what hurts me. What forced you to speak about it? Not because it can benefit anyone else, or because that girl can be arrested for what she did wrong as it was required if she was a murderer. You are speaking because its hurting you and that is what concerns me.
Victims should speak if they want to save other people from being the next victim. I am not comparing love and crime at all here. And there is no reason that they should be compared. And if you still don't understand, kindly go through my poetry. I wrote it for helping people like you only. Good luck
i like poetry and keep it up
Word.. Thanks! I will. :)
YOLO means You Only Live Once, so instead of using it as an expression to do whatever you want, use it as an expression to live life right, because you only get one chance at life.
That's the best way I've heard of to look at the expression YOLO.. I always hated that saying cause people would say it before doing something stupid.. BUT.. The way you phrased it.. That makes more sense.. You only live once, so you should try to live life right.. Well said.. Thanks for the thoughtful and interesting comment!
Can feel the emotion in this. Thanks for sharing. :)
Word. It helps to hear feedback like that especially right when I'm getting started! And.. You're welcome. Thank you for the feedback! :) Oh and thanks for the minnowsupport thingy too! That was cool of you!
I am sending you a virtual hug! Positive vibes to you @apolymask
Thanks for the virtual hug and positive vibes. :) Same to you! hugs back and positive vibes to you as well
This is the best part that you did not suppress your emotions and let it come out.
Heh. Word. I agree.. This one was definitely a bit emotional. And definitely going to work on that in the future! Thanks for the feedback bud!
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@apolymask,
Great work friend! Not only a poem it has a rhyme look like a rap! Life is something that wan't say this is it! So, be relax, live relax!
Cheers~
Thanks! That's really interesting to hear and I'ma think about that.. And yeah.. You know.. I guess it is sort of similar to rap, but I still don't think I can rap! Maybe someday, heh.. For now I'm comfortable with spoken word.
@apolymask,
You got that rhythm! I think you can do that friend!
Cheers~
so good work and beautiful it was
thanks a ton for sharing !!!