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RE: Air-Clinic The first decentralized health care platform on the Steem Blockchain (Episode 1)
Thank you, you don't need my permission to drop your inputs. Please do, I always value it.
I saw the large space late and due to the HF20 update, I don't want to waste Mana.
Okay.
I'm usually telling people to add commas, but this is one place where no comma is needed.
Two issues here. First, that's the wrong expression. It's a negative expression, which is not what you were going for. Also, you dropped an "a" in "wait."
Before the "and" here is a good place for a comma. Although I'd really prefer if you split the sentence into two sentences.
This needs a comma after "however." The comma you do have there should be a period.
Not would. Will.
These are the examples from your first paragraph. You can do better than this.
Thank you, would do better