Art and creative writing contest #173 my entry

in Venezolanos Steem11 days ago (edited)

EMBERS OF WARMTH

The girl settles beside the oven as evening deepens, letting its quiet heat reach her before the night can. The fire does not roar; it murmurs, glowing softly, as if conserving its strength. In that glow, her face appears thoughtful, marked not by drama, but by the calm seriousness of a child who has learned to observe more than she speaks.

She holds a cup between her hands, feeling its warmth travel slowly into her fingers. It is not luxury she drinks, only something warm enough to keep the body steady. The bread she eats is plain, broken carefully, as though every piece must last longer than hunger itself. Nothing here is wasted—not food, not heat, not moments.
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Her feet touch the floor without protest. Cold has been a frequent visitor in her life, and she has learned how to sit with it. The room around her tells its own quiet story: simple furniture, worn surfaces, tools shaped by daily use. This is a place of survival rather than abundance, yet it holds a certain honesty.

She leans closer to the oven, not out of desperation, but trust. The fire gives what it can, and she accepts it without expectation. In this still moment, warmth becomes more than heat—it becomes reassurance. Though her world is small and restrained, there is dignity in her patience, and in the soft light beside her, hope continues to glow, steady and unspoken.

Thank you my friend @hljott for the invitation
I invite @edmund.nef ,@amagrace and @gabriela26 to participate

Link to the contest https://steemit.com/venezolanos-steem/@solperez/concurso-de-arte-y-escritura-173-y-ganadores-de-la-edicion-172-art-and-writing-contest-173-y-winners-de-la-edicion-172

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This painting makes me sad I can't help and to me it does not look as if she trust the fire. There's a kind of lethargy in her appearance, can be she's thinking about what she read or away to escape or who knows she only things this is it. I also will know what's in the mug but most likely it's only water. Indeed nothing is wasted not even water to wash herself.

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Hermoso texto, que describe el entorno donde la niña habita. El narrador se detiene en el gesto de la niña y en su postura corporal para decirnos que ella vive en una pobreza extrema que le taladra los huesos y la deja débil para actuar.

Me encantó leerte. Un abrazo.

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