"Steemit Challenge s28wk1 : Zany and the tiny colored dragon.

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On a dark evening, the rain was pouring down in torrents. It was as if someone had washed away all the colors of the colorful city with rainwater. All sounds and warmth were lost with it. Zany was walking on that dark evening and it felt like the whole world was against her. And today was one of those days and it was a day when loneliness felt so heavy, it was hard to breathe properly.

At that moment, a splash of color suddenly fell on the water that had accumulated on the road. Zany first thought it might be a reflection of some light. But when she wiped her eyes and looked again, she saw a colorful little dragon floating like a fairy tale. Zany was shocked, fear and various kinds of curiosity arose inside her. From that curiosity, Zany started to get scared. The dragon started laughing at her and seemed to be saying, "Did you call me?"

But Zany didn't know anything about it. And the silent cry inside her may have turned into a call. The dragon slowly started moving towards Zany's hand. But Zany couldn't even move away. The dragon came near the finger and seemed to be asking for permission. Zany held her breath and extended her hand forward in fear. And at that moment, as soon as the dragon sat on her finger, a warm current started flowing inside Zany's body.

She felt warmth. It was as if someone was gently touching the broken places in her heart. Zany started asking the dragon in a very small voice, who are you? Her voice was so small that the sound of the rain was louder than it. However, the dragon lit a small fire on the tip of its finger, but the fire did not burn, but gave light and warmth.

The dragon suddenly sent a message to Zany's mind. I am the feeling that you had kept hidden for a long time. Don't lose me, your fear has hidden me for a long time. Zany's throat went dry, today maybe for the first time she is seeing her feelings with her own eyes and she can understand them in reality.

The two of them were walking along the city streets. And the colorful light of the little dragon was spilling out in the middle of the road. Like a thick layer of colors. Zany could feel the change inside her, her mind was getting better, her troubles were disappearing in an instant. And this was because of that little dragon after a long time.

The little dragon said that it is not your fault that you have been alone for so long, but now is your time to learn. You have to learn how to feel alive again. How to eliminate loneliness. Hearing this, Zany's tears rolled down her eyes. At the same time, there was a question in Zany's small, gentle voice that could I do it? The question was small, but there was a very big ocean hidden inside it.

The dragon floated to her chest and said, You can. Because I am and will always be inside you. Shortly after, the dragon broke into pieces and the lights entered Zany's heart. And it happened so gently that Zany could feel that it happened inside her mind and that the dragon was born and taken inside her mind.

The rain stopped and at the same time Zany began to realize that her mind had become much lighter. And how today had changed, the city was not alone. Everything seemed to sparkle. She knew that now there was a luminous dragon inside her. There was a feeling that would not let her be lonely and that would protect her heart from being broken.

And thus began a new feeling, a new evening in Zany's life. Where he learned from the dragon that she had to find the light of her life herself and walk in that direction illuminated. Such an evening also taught Zany how a small dragon can change life. And this is how the story ends here.

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Week-1 : Zany and the tiny colored dragon

 
Hello @boishakhi23, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-1. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness0.9/3Good
Presentation09/1Good
My observation0.9/1Good
Total9.5/10
FeedbackWell done, you have tried to show you the mental situation of Zany well and sent tiny dragon to her to relieve her stresses.
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Oh qué cool tu historia la enlazaste muy bien además que muy chévere eso que el dragón fuera el sentimiento que mantuvo oculto por tanto tiempo de verdad hacemos mucho eso y la conciencia nos habla. Bye ❤️ suerte