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RE: "Desafío Steemit s28wk2: Recordando a través de la sanación"
Week-2 : Remembering Through Healing
Hello @elider11, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | Okay |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.5/10 | |
| Feedback | You have a nice and touchy story despite all the contrary facts. According to the prompt she had left home because of bad relations with her mother. She had no happy memories in her mind but she came back because she wanted to help her family. | |
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Saludos apreciado amigo. Ofrezco disculpas pues quizás se tergiverso el contexto de la historia debido a la traducción. No obstante, interprete y considere que el hecho de haber desavenencias entre hija y madre, no impide que hubo momentos felices entre ellas. Incluso hay un fragmento en su narración que dice que Tina recordába los susurros y risas de su madre. Por ello interpreta que se debatía entre los malos y buenos recuerdos y quise que imperasen los bueno recuerdos para transmitir una enseñanza. Mil perdones si no supe interpretar la dinámica de la historia.
You are right my friend, translation definitely destorts or even changes the meaning at times and some of the best stories suffer due to that. I hope I will read more stories in coming weeks. Thank you!
Amen. Gracias por su comprensión