Steemit Challenge s28wk2 : Remembering Through Healing

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Tina my daughter, I know how you feel right now, wipe your tears for I am here with you. Now tell me how you feel without seeing me cooking and doing everything for you. Tina held her mum tightly so that she will not go again , in a gentle voice she asked her mother where she went without remembering her. The mother assured her that she would forever protect her, and she will be with her always. That was not enough; she started crying uncontrollably leaning on her mother's lap.
Her mother requested for water; Tina stood up to go get the water for her mother, and she woke up from her dream.

Oh! no!! So it was all a dream she shouted , the memories came back afresh; she started remembering how the mother will pamper and do everything without disturbing her., how the mother will make sure she is among the best students in school; after all these memories,she carried her mother's burial pictures and started asking her mother for forgiveness.

Oh! mother, I know I have wronged you by not being by your side even at the time of your death, as your lovely child, you know i am the last person to leave you to die without spending my last money to make sure you stayed alive for me. Please forgive me, please ma forgive me , come back and stay with me ,no one could fill this vacuum you left behind. I have been the shadow of myself since I came back to this house.
Nobody to call me by my lovely name oh death, why this time that I needed my dearest mother the most.

It was done on Tina truly that her mother was no more; she started consoling herself through the word of God. She recalled when the mother was alive and the things she told her concerning people that lost their loved one's, Tina's mind started getting stronger .

Whenever she remembers the mother she starts singing, one of the evening as she was singing she heard a loud voice that sounds like that of her mother she remained calm and listened carefully.

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The voice assured her to be a good girl and do good to others, the mother told her to never pay evil with evil. After this encounter with her mother she regained her strength and confidence to move on.

She started preaching the word of God in her neighborhood, she discovered her going out to interact with people and telling them some Biblical truth is helping her to heal fast, but one thing she keeps remembering is the love her mother showered on her when she was alive she promised to make her proud even in death.

The memorial day of her late mother approached , Tina and her imitate family decided to gather and pray against any untimely death , prayed that God should help them to leave a good life so that on the resurrection morning they will see her mother again.

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Week-2 : Remembering Through Healing

 
Hello @okere-blessing, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness3/3Good
Presentation0.9/1Good
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.5/10
FeedbackYou have a nice and touching story with lots of love between two of them but that's where you missed a crucial point. If you read the prompt once again you will see where you missed out.
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El mejor refugio está en Dios. Cuando vivimos esos momentos dolorosos, no existe algo mejor que hablar con Dios y tomar fuerza, por medio de cantos de adoración que fortalecen el alma.

¡Bonita historia!

Thank you very much my friend. God is the only one who can repair a broken heart. I hope you have participated.