Steemit Challenge s28wk6: Unexpected Chat's True Twist

in #writing-s28wk62 days ago

Whenever Antony brought the thought of spending a good time with her after having coffee with her, the same thought kept floating in the girl's mind and she also started getting very attracted to Antony and she also started thinking in her mind that when will she meet him and when will she spend a good time with him

Then later when the two of them finished having coffee and the moment for them to leave in different directions was ready, they spent some more time with each other. When Antony offered her many more things, she accepted everything. At the same time, on other days, he started offering to do many things starting from dinner and lunch.

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She accepted those offers. Gradually, the relationship developed very well. Then a thought came to Antony's mind. When he came to the country, he would stay with her for the rest of his life or would he only do business with her. These thoughts started working in his mind.

But leaving those thoughts aside, he started focusing on his business and he saw that he needed a clever and beautiful girl for his business. Then he thought where in the country he would arrange such a girl. Then it came to his mind. He had talked to a girl a few days ago and if he did something like that to her again, maybe she would accept it.

Then he thought again, what would he do if he fell in love with that girl? Many thoughts started coming to his mind and he didn't understand what to do. Should he express his love to her or should he express his business? He couldn't understand anything.

But he had to make some decision and he spent a lot of time to make that decision. But after a while, his business started to suffer losses and the losses became so high that he couldn't recover them and it didn't seem like he would be able to because he needed a staff for important tasks starting from his business transactions.

So in the end, without thinking anything else, he made the girl his offer. When the girl heard this, she was a little surprised and happy. But the girl also thought that now that he had accepted her in his business, maybe after a while she could accept him as her life partner.

So without thinking anything, he got attached to her and started various They started doing various kinds of work, meanwhile their relationship became much better. They met each other every day and talked every day, which resulted in the depth of their relationship increasing a lot more.

In this way, when their relationship gradually deepened, a relationship started to develop between them, but in this case, the girl was most interested in building a relationship. She thought that since Antony had given her all the offers first, now that girl would express her love to Antony.

Antony was still busy with his business and was worried that only that girl expressed her love to him. When Antony heard about this love, he was very surprised because he had hired only that girl for his business. Love would never hire a person who loved him. He would keep the person he loved close to him. He would never let him suffer like this.

He would always keep the person he loved close to him and keep it a secret. He would only see him himself. He would not give him the opportunity to see anyone else or give him a job anywhere. When he told this to the girl, the girl was completely broken. She thought that if they were business partners, maybe a relationship could have become a life partner, but now there was no Nothing happened

In the end, the relationship they had was completely ruined. The girl also moved away from the businessman. Antony could not keep up with his business. His business was completely destroyed and he was completely exhausted. The two went their separate ways. Their beautiful lives were destroyed in an instant.

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Week-6 : Unexpected Chat's True Twist

 
Hello @bijoy1, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-6. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria is provided below:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness3/3Good
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.5/10
FeedbackYou have a nice but complicated story. I guess Antony was unable to handle both, his love and his business so spoiled both in the end.
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