Steemit Challenge s28wk3: When Hope Returns

in #writing-s28wk314 days ago (edited)

ٱلسَّلَامُ عَلَيْكُمْ وَرَحْمَةُ ٱللَّٰهِ وَبَرَكَاتُهُ


Hello Everyone I Am @MEMAMUN 👳‍♀️ From #Bangladesh

Dear friends, I hope you are all well. Let's all read the story attentively.

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Ronnie was very depressed and lonely, because he had recently broken up, he thought in his heart that he would never be in a relationship with anyone again, because he thought that relationships only hurt, he quit his job and chose loneliness, this loneliness made him mentally weaker and tired, but suddenly one day he went to a park and saw a gardener taking care of a half-dead flower tree, then he asked the owner why he was taking care of this half-dead flower tree so much, it will die after a few days, then the gardener replied to him that I am taking care of the tree because it will give many beautiful flowers next spring. This word from the gardener helped Ronnie think deeply, then Ronnie thought about giving his life another chance. From then on, he started going to that park every day and this is how spring began. Ronnie noticed that the flower tree really had new pink flowers again. This inspired Ronnie to live a new life.

Then Roni joined his work, then he met a girl named Nina in Roni's office. Nina is his new colleague, Nina's lively smile fascinated him. Thus, Roni's friendship with Nina started growing, they started cooperating with each other in various tasks, Roni wanted to fall in love with Nina in a new way, but in Nina's case, it was different, because Nina never thought anything about Roni, she only thought of him as her colleague. He told Roni this, but Nina's words affected Roni, from then on he started avoiding Nina. Nina could not accept this change in Roni.

then one day she called Roni to talk to him at a restaurant. Roni also came to the restaurant and then Nina told Roni about a terrible reality in her life, Nina said that she thought of Roni as her older brother. When Nina was 15 years old, her older brother went on a trip and was killed in an accident on the way to the tour. Since then, she has been traumatized and started looking for her own older brother, thus becoming abnormal. For several years, she has been trying to adapt and join the work. When she first saw Ronnie, she found that Ronnie's appearance was similar to her older brother, saying that she handed him a picture of her brother. Nina also says that her older brother was very important to her, so when she first saw Ronnie, she thought that this was her brother, and treated him well, but Ronnie took it differently. And Nina left, saying sorry to Ronnie again.

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About a month passed, Nina stopped coming to work, because she was hurt, and she could not believe that the one she thought of as her older brother could ever think of her like this. The matter also hurts Roni, then Roni realizes his own mistake, Roni calls Nina but the phone was switched off, this worries Roni. Then Roni stands in front of Nina's house knowing her current location, shows everyone the picture and starts asking. And finds Nina, then he talks to Nina and asks her to come back to work, and promises Nina that from now on he will also be Nina's big brother.


Lesson:-

  • It's important to respect everyone's personal thoughts, what I think may not be what someone else thinks.

I will invite a few of my friends to share stories of beautiful creativity who will showcase their talents here. @chant @wilmer1998 @max-pro @solaymann and @suboohi maam...

Thank you dear @dove11 brother for organizing such a beautiful topic.


Thank You Everyone For My Post Reading


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Excelente historia apreciada amigo. No esperaba un final así. Debemos siempre a valorar nos y saber que un fracaso no es el final. Bendiciones y éxitos

Thank you so much dear brother for your valuable comment 😑

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Week-3 : Hope Grows Like Spring

 
Hello @memamun, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5
Originality & Uniqueness3/3
Presentation0.9/1
My observation0.9/1
Total9.5/10
FeedbackYou have a nice story according to the prompt but you missed protagonist's name at more than one points. You have spelled his name differently and also you started your story with an intro.
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Thank you dear brother for my post review

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Curated By: max-pro