Hi, @josepha

It's a pleasure to see that you've accepted my challenge, welcome! Here is your evaluation:

Your story is really good. Everything that happened to you during the day seemed to indicate that you should stay another day, that is, if you believe in hunches and premonitions, which not everyone does. Otherwise, look, even though you felt something might happen, you still left.

The moral of the story is based more on your own personal beliefs; it's not invalid, but something more general would have been more engaging. Even so, the accident photos are excellent and lend credibility to your story. Good work.