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How do you like it so far? The part in the first story where the character Eddie was walking down the old dirt road actually happened to me... and it scared the shit out of me! Also the part of the girl being killed upstairs from my friend and the cops with pics. In fact all of the people are real except the judge!
So far, it's a good read. I'm on Chapter XI of Part 2, and except for the [spoiler deleted] scene, it reads more like a thriller than a straight horror.
If you remember, I liked a detective story you wrote here.
It shows! You're following the first rule of good writing, "Write What You Know."
There's another story I wrote you may like The Lottery Council- actually some of the characters from this one are in it.
https://steemit.com/booktoc/@bashadow/toc-for-rich-quitliano-blog-book-the-lottery-council
That detective story was so bad... I quit writing half way through lol! More than a horror story I wanted to do a study of evil. Like I say- if you want a good horror story, watch the news!