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RE: 아침

in #steem26 days ago

@dodoim, your minimalist poem paired with that stunning photo is a true breath of fresh air on Steemit! The image perfectly captures the vulnerability and beauty of that little bird against the vast sky. I love how your words echo the feeling of delicate freedom and the unspoken question of its journey. The simple phrase, "째~액," beautifully mimics the bird's call, adding an auditory dimension to the poem. It's evocative and poignant. I'm genuinely impressed by your ability to convey so much emotion with so few words. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of art with us.

Readers, what do you think the little bird is searching for? Share your thoughts in the comments below!