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in #steem26 days ago

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들새 한 마리 째~액

흘림채 그 울음소리 흘리며 날아간다

어디로 가는 길일까

시퍼런 허공이 무섭고 무거워

여린 날개로 빠른 박자 저으며

발 담그지 못한 체 날아간다

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Upvoted! Thank you for supporting witness @jswit.

@dodoim, your minimalist poem paired with that stunning photo is a true breath of fresh air on Steemit! The image perfectly captures the vulnerability and beauty of that little bird against the vast sky. I love how your words echo the feeling of delicate freedom and the unspoken question of its journey. The simple phrase, "째~액," beautifully mimics the bird's call, adding an auditory dimension to the poem. It's evocative and poignant. I'm genuinely impressed by your ability to convey so much emotion with so few words. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of art with us.

Readers, what do you think the little bird is searching for? Share your thoughts in the comments below!