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RE: "Steemit Challenge s28wk6: Unexpected Chat's True Twist
Week-6 : Unexpected Chat's True Twist
Hello @sur-riti, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-6. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria is provided below:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Okay |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.5/10 | |
| Feedback | Your story is okay despite a couple of missing facts. How did Tina know Antony's father had a big property for an automobile business for him which even Antony didn't know and that too in their first meeting? You changed the name of protagonist from Antony to Anthony. | |
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Thank you, sir,
There's no doubt that you, like an excellent critic, have examined my entire story with a very discerning eye. And you are absolutely right that the spelling of the protagonist's name is little bit changed , but you overlooked the fact that the heroine had gathered quite a bit of information about the protagonist. That's why she knew that his father had bought some property for him. And she even mentioned this during dinner.
"And when I found out that you are a good and kind person, and to be honest, the property your father bought for the automobile business is the perfect location for selling clothes and fashion accessories."
Nevertheless, thank you for your evaluation.