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RE: "Steemit Challenge s28wk6: Unexpected Chat's True Twist

in #writing-s28wk63 days ago

Thank you, sir,

There's no doubt that you, like an excellent critic, have examined my entire story with a very discerning eye. And you are absolutely right that the spelling of the protagonist's name is little bit changed , but you overlooked the fact that the heroine had gathered quite a bit of information about the protagonist. That's why she knew that his father had bought some property for him. And she even mentioned this during dinner.

"And when I found out that you are a good and kind person, and to be honest, the property your father bought for the automobile business is the perfect location for selling clothes and fashion accessories."

Nevertheless, thank you for your evaluation.