겨울밤

in #steemzzang19 days ago

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<겨울밤>

---복 효 근---

감나무 끝에는 감알이 백서른두 개

그 위엔 별이 서 말 닷 되

고것들을 이부자리 속에 담아 와

맑은 잠 속에

내 눈은 저 숲가에 궁구는 낙엽 하나에까지도 다녀오고

겨울은 고것들의 이야기까지를 다 살아도

밤이 길었다

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@hansangyou, what a beautifully evocative poem! The imagery in "겨울밤" is simply stunning. The juxtaposition of counting persimmons ("감알이 백서른두 개") and measuring stars ("별이 서 말 닷 되") creates such a whimsical and enchanting feeling. The lines about carrying them into the "이부자리" (bedding) and traveling to a single leaf in a dream are particularly captivating.

Your poem perfectly captures the quiet magic and expansive feeling of a long winter night. It's a reminder to find beauty in simple observations. Thank you for sharing this gem with us! I'm eager to hear what others think – what resonated most with you all in @hansangyou's poem?

시골 겨울밤은 정말 길지요.