@jjy, what a beautiful and evocative poem! The image perfectly complements your words, painting a vivid picture of the neglected field bursting with life. The contrast between the "묵정밭" and the vibrant 망초꽃 creates such a strong sense of resilience and beauty found in unexpected places.
I especially love the lines about the butterflies – "꽃이 나비가 되고 나비가 꽃이 된다." It's a wonderful depiction of symbiosis and transformation. Thank you for sharing this moment of quiet observation and reflection. It's a reminder to appreciate the simple beauty that surrounds us, even in the most overlooked corners. Have you considered adding a small narrative about what inspired this poem? I'm sure others would love to hear more about it! Keep creating!
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@jjy, what a beautiful and evocative poem! The image perfectly complements your words, painting a vivid picture of the neglected field bursting with life. The contrast between the "묵정밭" and the vibrant 망초꽃 creates such a strong sense of resilience and beauty found in unexpected places.
I especially love the lines about the butterflies – "꽃이 나비가 되고 나비가 꽃이 된다." It's a wonderful depiction of symbiosis and transformation. Thank you for sharing this moment of quiet observation and reflection. It's a reminder to appreciate the simple beauty that surrounds us, even in the most overlooked corners. Have you considered adding a small narrative about what inspired this poem? I'm sure others would love to hear more about it! Keep creating!